Just 2 weeks

by master of shadow   Nov 20, 2005


In just two weeks my worlds been torn in two,
14 days is all it took,
and I don't know what to do,
one by one my families falling,
fighting shouting and nearly dieing,
rainbow was the first to go,
by overdose was her route,
now in hospital,
I thought she would die,
she was just lying there,
she didn't move,
the ambulance came,
I thought it was too late,
didn't know what to do,
Then Marc walked out on us,
said that we didn't want him anyway,
won't answer our calls,
won't let us see him,
cut us from his life,
and now Sirius,
drink has regained its hold,
nothing i can do to stop it,
nothing I can do to help,
parents are arguing more than before,
not just shouting,
but hitting too,
Crystals started cutting,
and the baby's ill,
who could think all this could happen,
who would have known what fate would do,
in just two weeks,
a fortnight is all it took,
to destroy my world,
rip my life in two.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is so so sad, I feel your pain! I love your poetry, you do a great job expressing yourself! Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    Sorry. Excellent poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    I'm so sorry you went through all of that...hopefully you had friends to talk to along the way.

    great job expressing the emotion in this one, it kept me reading and sympathizing. i look forward to reading more
    take care
    -sara

  • Oh my gosh this is so sad. I feel sorry for you, email me if you want to talk.

    thanks for you comment.

    charlie xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Natasha

    Ah, that's sad =( verry well writtin.
    In the beginning, the flow didn't go perfect and then after 'bout three lines, viola 'great!'

    well done,
    ~* NatashA *~

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