Nicely written, good meaning one minor thing - "14 days is all it too,
" took?

Ah, that's sad =( verry well writtin.
In the beginning, the flow didn't go perfect and then after 'bout three lines, viola 'great!'

well done,
~* NatashA *~

Oh my gosh this is so sad. I feel sorry for you, email me if you want to talk.

thanks for you comment.

charlie xx

I'm so sorry you went through all of that...hopefully you had friends to talk to along the way.

great job expressing the emotion in this one, it kept me reading and sympathizing. i look forward to reading more
take care
-sara

Sorry. Excellent poem! 5/5

This is so so sad, I feel your pain! I love your poetry, you do a great job expressing yourself! Keep writing!