This is really good. i can really relate to the feeling. the annology of a river is very creative i like it a lot

Omg thank you so much, its because i live in the country , nature can tell you a lot about life and can be used as inspiration for so many things , just look.

That was really good... great comparison. I just got lost while reading it b/c of the format... maybe u should try some structure. I wasn't going to read it b/c of that cuz i usually don't but its such a good poem that it draws u in. I'm glad I did. Great job.

Well sucha weird structure but its nice tho... meaningful and nice poem.. full of emotions.
Iav 2 say ... GOOD JOB. i am givin u a 5 on that. :)