by Leslie Nov 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Pulses running |
by Symera
Good poem I love the way u used short sentences b/c it added to the whole run theme by making the poem move at a fast pace. The only thing I would say is that the ending was too sudden i wanted more from the poem than that quik resolution other than that it was a really good poem. GREAT JOB! |