by x-Beth-x Nov 20, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
- plz vote and comment THANX - |
by N J Thornton
This poem topic is unique, so well done on your originality. It was quite emotional too and I think you portrayed the heartache well. In the first and last stanza on the third line after the question mark, you should have a capital letter. In the seventh stanza, last line, it should be "felt." Well done. |
by Tara Kay
I like this poem, its really good, keep it up |
by Bredada
I meant to say that type of guy sorry if i made it seem like something else |
by Bredada
I hate that type of thank god i have the best boyfrien dnow i love your poem n thanks for the comments:) |