Gabriella

by Anthony   Nov 20, 2005


Your mind is still a mystery,
To this boy you've intrigued so,
Though we've been friends for so long,
There's still little that I know.

I wish you'd let me in,
And tell me what you feel.
In truth we're much alike,
And can help each other heal.

Trust is not a leisure,
That you can afford to give.
I understand completely,
But that is just no way to live.

We argue and we fight,
But that doesn't change a thing.
I know that you can't see it,
But I need the laughter that you bring.

The pain you sometimes feel,
Is similar to whats in my heart.
Lets both try to relieve,
And confide in me for a start.

You're one of the greatest people,
I know and ever will,
I feel really bad,
Because you seem incomplete still.

I will do my very best,
To try to be there till the end,
And in time I hope,
That we could be more than friends.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Heartfelt and touching. You're a very good friend but I do sense there are stronger feelings on your part ;) Don't push her too much, she'll come around. Wonderful write.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Very nice, there was something clean and simple in the poem that really made it beautiful.
    Well, I couldn't find any mistakes, and the sentiment and story tell the rest...
    All very nice, and I honestly mean that.

    Good Writing!
    beth