Very nice, there was something clean and simple in the poem that really made it beautiful.
Well, I couldn't find any mistakes, and the sentiment and story tell the rest...
All very nice, and I honestly mean that.

Good Writing!
beth

Heartfelt and touching. You're a very good friend but I do sense there are stronger feelings on your part ;) Don't push her too much, she'll come around. Wonderful write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela