=( i like this one, but very sad |
by Michelle
Really good. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for the compliments as well. I enjoyed reading your poetry. :o) |
I think i live a false life/.. i keep wearing a fake smile..nice job |
I loved this poem. familiar story... sad and true. nice write. |
by Stabbylou
Hmm... I concur, can relate a lot. Great poem, simple but very good work. Also thanks for commenting on my poem, I'll be sure to check your stuff out in the future. |
Loved it!! Keep on writing! And dont live a false life. Tell everyone to fuk off. Dont let them turn you into a lie. |
by Little Dot
Brilliant poem, you have so much emotion put into all of your poems. |
by Vanessa Lea
Those four little words can save a person a lot of grief, and I've found if you say them enough - you can start to believe them. |
Really simple yet so affective. Saying those words makes everything easier when you think to yourself that maybe you will be ok. I love it good work |