I like this one, dark, meaningful, and a great command of the language nice job |
Amazing!! dark, deep and true. excellent work. i love it! |
by XxTeArSxX17
Nice job i love the opening to it, and you have a nice way with word keep up the good work |
by Mistress
Wow! I really liked this one! *thumbs up* |
by InMyWorld
Haha this one gave me chills...no doubt from the truth in it. awesome writing style and the topic kept me thinking about it. |
by avery
I love it how you give life a whole new meaning than what you would find in the dictionary. You can tell this has a lot of emotion in it. |
by Little Dot
This poem is very true, all people end up in the same place and what happened before then doesn't matter. |