No one about

by master of shadow   Nov 20, 2005


Whys there never anyone there,
when you need to talk,
they all disappear,
but when you want to be left alone,
they appear in swarm's,
asking if your alright,
but when you really need them,
they are no where to be found,
when you need someone to talk to,
when you need someone to help,
no one is ever about,
you are alone,
isolated,
without help,
no one to save you from the gathering darkness,
no guiding light,
no help,
when no ones about.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ЀvÏL

    This poem is so reall i live every day of my live like that..and now i started to learn that if you wana halp your self and feel better you got to do every thing by your self not waiting 4 any1 to help you =) stay strong

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    WoW! Exactly what really happens when you live in this crazy life... you never get it when necesary... it's just like the quote... "Failure occurs in public view while success ccurs in private..."
    Awesome job... i mean it!

    5/5

    ~stevie~
    ~yellowfeverlime~

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    Before i start, thank you so much for commenting mine it means a lot that you took the time to do that.

    i really like the topic of this poem and i think a lot of people can relate...things often happen ironically like that dont they? great flow also and i love how the title ended it...good job keep it up 5/5

    Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Hey do me a fav. vote on that poem you commented on(don no witch one). ur poem is good and really true i hate that! keep it up. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    This is a really great poem, i enjoyed reading it...too true
    luv em

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