Lol ye that is so true. When I really really need someone, and I feel so alone, there is never anyone there for me. Just like you said, and when I want to be left alone they are all over me! Haha

Very well done. I can relate to it! Good poem, keep up the good work -xxx-

The first three lines don't flow great.. but it's understandable, so it doesn't matter.
I think that the rest is easier to read and it's a really good poem, the way you write is very enjoyable..

well done,
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This is the truth people do really act like that,thanks 4 commenting on my pem,5/5 keep up the good work.

Hey there awesome write!! i loved this piece.. sometimes i feel that way too.. but remember always stay strong and dunt let ur life decide you, you decide your life.. thank you so much for ur comment hunn.. much love.

Hey
good job! thanks for the comment on my poem "beaten heart"...

This is a really great poem, i enjoyed reading it...too true
luv em

Hey do me a fav. vote on that poem you commented on(don no witch one). ur poem is good and really true i hate that! keep it up. 4/5

Before i start, thank you so much for commenting mine it means a lot that you took the time to do that.

i really like the topic of this poem and i think a lot of people can relate...things often happen ironically like that dont they? great flow also and i love how the title ended it...good job keep it up 5/5

Sara

WoW! Exactly what really happens when you live in this crazy life... you never get it when necesary... it's just like the quote... "Failure occurs in public view while success ccurs in private..."
Awesome job... i mean it!

5/5

~stevie~
~yellowfeverlime~

This poem is so reall i live every day of my live like that..and now i started to learn that if you wana halp your self and feel better you got to do every thing by your self not waiting 4 any1 to help you =) stay strong