My father

by ANNA   Nov 20, 2005


M y father has 5 kids
and he abandon 2
My father has 5 kids
hope he doesn't abandon you

my father likes to drink
and drinking is what he can do
why can't he stop
cause he is going to kill us too

I hate my dad
for everything he did
i hate him so bad
sometimes i wish he was dead

please tell me what u think this is true

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Ooo, don't know what to say there. Just that I know how it feels. My mother, when I was a kid, was living with a man kind of like that. Though, he wasn't drunk and beat me and my bro anyways. So, good poem. Very good.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*You are my only one*~

    Aw this is really sad. It is a good poem. I'm sorry you don't like your dad, I hope things will get better for you and him! If you ever need anything I'm here is you need to talk! --Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Damn thats sad!!
    great job
    i love it !!
    ..... well i give u a 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Aww thats sad really good tho!!
    xaaronx