Aww thats sad really good tho!!
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Damn thats sad!!
great job
i love it !!
..... well i give u a 5/5

Aw this is really sad. It is a good poem. I'm sorry you don't like your dad, I hope things will get better for you and him! If you ever need anything I'm here is you need to talk! --Lauren

Ooo, don't know what to say there. Just that I know how it feels. My mother, when I was a kid, was living with a man kind of like that. Though, he wasn't drunk and beat me and my bro anyways. So, good poem. Very good.