Very nicely written, I loved it all especially the third stanza. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Wow..this kinda puts u on the edge...n makes u wanna kno more...gr8 poem....luv all ur work...btw thnx 4 replyin 2 my post....i appreciate it! 5/5!
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Great poem i like it a lot, it hooks you in and forces you to read to the end very good