Lovely, nicely done!!! One thing though your to is wrong it should be too in "to hard to express". Grammatically proper it should read 'too hard to express'.

Awwwww.....This is beautiful. You put alot of passion into this I really love it.

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Its beautiful please keep writting your comments even my un-poetic boyfriend loved it.

Its beautiful please keep writting your comments even my un-poetic boyfriend loved it.