Blue Remedies

by Krete   Nov 20, 2005


Tell the water,
how to move.
Stand on the edge,
hope it will be soon.

You stare at fate,
right in her eyes.
Hazel discolored,
She ignores your cry.

The hope & dream,
wishes of destiny,
what now can you,
find to remedy?

Its all set,
before your eyes,
bleeding & calling,
bringing you to cries.

But what now becomes,
your manifest dream,
is a falling spiral,
down to the final beam.

Remedies always fail.
No matter what you do,
you can never achieve,
escape from the blue.

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  • 18 years ago

    by KAT

    This is a good poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lushed

    Amazing...
    just amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Yeah believe me i've tried. You can only really move along with the current and see if you sink or float. I'm trying all my best to float... wonderful poem my dear...
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    You've done it once again. Your words never cease to amaze me. I always get a huge grin on my face when I see you have a new one. You're a brilliant poet!!! =] Take care.