Thank you.

Beautiful.. just beautiful, And to respond to the comment you left me, Your an AMAZING poet, Not to be sexist or anything but usually boys aren't as good at poetry as girls are, but you've prove that wrong, again great job, 5/5,

And,

My favorite line still remains to be,

"Sadly you didn't break my heart.
You stole it in my sleep.
You still have it to this day.
You're stabbing it softly as i speak"

Wow thats how i feel right now mabe u could read and rate some of my poems i relly loved this poem it was rely good cause i feel like crap it mad me happy other people go trew the same things(:

I kno exatcly how u feel blieve me. n if u evr need sum1 2 talk 2 just email me....anyway...worderful poem...i luvd it....gr8 sho of emmotion....n wonderful rhyming....5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Wow taht is a really good poem and i know exactly how u feel and its effed up and i cry about it all the time but just hang in there u have probably heard this alot but things will get better cuz shit happens for a reason and u have to find it

Wow taht is a really good poem and i know exactly how u feel and its effed up and i cry about it all the time but just hang in there u have probably heard this alot but things will get better cuz shit happens for a reason and u have to find it

Man you need to move past it, i been there and i am still there but ive learnt no matter how sorry i feel for myself and how many poems i write bout it it doesnt make me feel better.
you need to try and move on and get to somewhere else, make yourself happy by trying to get out there and do new things, the worlds huge man, theres plenty of girls out there.
oh and good poem by the way, keep it up.

OMGosh! woooowww thats an EXCELLENT poem, it's very sad, and i'm very sorry for you, i hope you feel better.....5/5

*Lollipop Sweetie*

Well written

Don't let it get you down forever everyones heart breaks sometimes learn from this goo emotion 5/5

Good writing. both the boy and girl are to blame for breaking his heart. the girl for breaking his heart, the boy for letting her.

David, that is a great poem. i love how it expresses what most people feel for others. It is a tough time, but almost everyone gets threw with it. I hope it works out sweety.

Love always, Jennifer.

I love it!!!! Excellent poem, very well put together. please feel free to read my poems.

Great poem, put together well and it was very sad but hang in there, things arent always as bad as they seem.
Tara xxx

Ohhh david that was beautiful!!! God i feel that way bout my ex too. *snifs* it'll be alright!! If she is your true love (i'm not doubting it for a second mind you) well she's gona come crawling back and if she isn't then you are going to find the love of your life!!!
well *hugs* hope it will get better!!
luv jess xoxox

Another excellent poem. So great. Keep it up.

Tiffany.xox.

Wow...this is a great poem and i understand totally how u feel..i mean everybody gets their heart broken some time or another...i have to give u a 5/5 because thats what u deserve...if u need someone to talk to...u know where to find me...keep up the great job
love always
PrEcIoSA

You said you only broke my heart,
But how can that be true?
You said things would get better.
But I'm still in love with you.

Beautiful. I loved this poem it reminded me so much of me it's crazy. good job and thanks for the comment on my poem.

Wow, Thats a really good poem, It makes both girl and guy think about how they deal and deal out break ups. It sorta fo seemed like you struggled to fine rhymes in a few place but other wise really good. Keep up the great work
xox
allison

My fave one of your poems that I have read so far. I understand every word. You know what you are talking about actually it’s why you wrote it right? To express yourself, to try to understand because part of you hopes that that will make the pain leave. But it doesn’t does it...am I right? Stay strong. X