Comments : I'm Okay, I Swear

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Oh hunny I feel for you SOOOOO much. My heart cries out for you because I know your pain. Going through every day wondering if anyone will notice the cuts, or if anyone will really care. It all sucks that way. Keep on going, keep holding on. I don't know if this will help you at all, but this is what I do. I take a pen and I write the words "Hold on" on my arm, so every time I am about to cut I see it there and I trace that over instead, or at least most times. I love you hun, and just know, you're not alone.

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Once again...another beautiful poem. I can somewhat relate. When I used to/sometimes still do cut, I wondered if I told any one...would they do anything.? Even though I didn't WANT to tell my friends...something in me said to...maybe it was to be reassured that they still loved me.? Sometimes when I feel the need to slice...I write. I know you know how to do that...maybe write more.? Just do what you can to try and quit...I know it's very hard to do...but it's better than trying to hide it all the time! I think that "hold on" idea is good. Just keep on living the best you can! And there are a lot of us on here that you can talk to if you need us!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ambar K

    Wow thats really deep. Love can be the sweetest thing or the worst, and you dont know which one you have till its too late. But I hope your life gets better soon and it has to, cause good things come to good people. So keep up the good work and keep writing and if you have time check out some of my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! This was an awesome poem! I loved it cuz I can relate to it:( . . . I really loved it though! Good job, it's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing!
    *Lisa*

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Its great!!
    i love it
    its amazing !!
    no lie !!
    5/5

  • This is an awesome poem!! ur a really talented writter!!! keep it up!! 5/5
    xxxooo

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    I really like this line:
    These days are cold without you
    And the nights i spend awake
    The little times i see you
    I have a ready smile to fake
    I know how that feels, i can totally relate.. but in reply to the comment you left me...
    *I didn't like that one line but only because someone keeps telling me that, like I hurt him, I dunno w/e I just wish it weren't true, but he hurt me, it's a long story, and too complicated to explain in this little box or comment, but i really do like the poem, it's very well written. Keep it up, I love all ur poems, you're really great! thanks for the comments:D