by Italian Stallion Nov 21, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As I walk into my room there is only one way to describe it, very neat. My room is small but it's like a mall, for the sense that there are possessions that all types of people would be fond of. The first thing you see when you walk in my room is my acoustic guitar. The guitar looks like a tree and how the grain flows in a natural sense, it's like the wind is blowing on the grain of the wood pushing the natural colors in different directions. Besides my guitar there are many interesting things to discover and examine. |
That was like a poem ive never read b4...yet it was interesting. u used gr8 description words....keep up the gr8 work...5/5! |
by Megadrive
Thought it was really good=D I dont really like this line though |
by Laura
Great job JO i loved it i felt like i was in ur room looking at everything u described wow keep it up xoxo laura marie aka sweets xoxo |
by girlyâ€
Great job |
by Juls
WOW!!! Great Job, You have been piecing it together for couple days and asking me what I think and I think it's a work of art. Like I said you can picture yourself in the room so well and understand the dimenations of everything very well. Sounds like a good place to be!!! Great Job and I hope you get a good grade on it at school!! Good Luck hun |