Very deep, very powerful, and very heart-wrenching. Once again, the emotion stands out and gives great emphasis to your poem. I liked this, the rythm was sometimes off, but your emotions over came any such flaw. I hope better days are in your future, and I'm glad I am able to read your work. Take care.

~rolo

I really liked it! I could tell it took a good deal of time and passion to write that! I could actually feel your pain. Even though I don't know the story behind it...you subtly gave enough hints to make it really good!

Oh my god...this is one of the greatest poems I have EVER read! Your an amazing writer. Its so beautiful. If you get a chance could you vote and comment on some of mine? Thank you so much. Great job!!! I hope to see more.