Very good poem...heartfelt...I wish you the best....I have read your poems and I don't always comment but you always get a five....

Getting to be my fave poet here. U write with a heart, indeed. Very warm and touching. After a storm, another sunlight, this time with a rainbow, and at the end of the rainbow...there might be a pot of gold. Who know's what's in store for tomorrow? We, women are so emotional than men and at times they dont see it...but ur an exception. I hope this write isn't fictional. The message in this poem was related to the readers so concretely that it took just one reading to understand the thoughts invoked. It doesnt need hardcore, dense literature to make the poem shine, as long as the feelings are drawn and the message flows smoothly for readers of all ages to comprehend, a piece of write is at its finest, a work in progress situation perfected by experience through the length of time. And you are one of the best poets whose works I enjoy reading a lot. U go...more power!
Rated: Excellent

urs, in rhythm&rhymes - cynthia
a.k.a. as Chit Cyn, Chitcyn, Cia Ang, Moongoddess, Cynthia Aluning

(Philippines)

I can also be reached on the following sites:
http://poetrypoem.com/chitcyn (the lighter, sensual side)
http://poetrypoem.com/moongoddess1 (a tribute to me by some writers)
http://poetrypoem.com/cynal ( the bolder/darker side)
www.poems-and-quotes.com (username: Chit Cyn)
www.poetrycoffeeshop.com (poetry critiques/forum)
www.poetry.com ( poem contest and exhibition)
www.poets.com (poet's workshop)
www.allpoetry.com (username Cia Ang)
www.poemshunter.com (poet Cia Ang)

Thank you for reading my poem.
this is really good to. I really like it

Thank you for your comment on my poem.ive been reading your poems and i must say your very talented.this one really touched me because i can really relate to this. i must say i loved it so much i printed it and mounted it on my fridge. it gives me new insight to my often caotic life.your a great poet with a wonderful gift of expression.ive added you to my favorites, so please keep up the wonderful work.

I believe everyone can relate to this one. The time when all else stands still, everything put on hold, while we await! Great job.

I've never read a poem quite like this one. it's very different... so honest. it flows well and leaves your heart content at the end. awesome poem :-)

Gary this is sucha beautiful poem. The way you describe things is very beautiful. Your words just lead right through. Excellent!

The imagery in this poem is powerful. fantastic flow. and good idea about starting each stanza. like (so,and,but) no one else could think of that and in this poem in works.
thanks for the comments on my work i took the advice.
5/5