Omg! girl im peed off that no one has commented you on this poem. gosh girl u got some talent. 5/5. i like this poem coz it can really make me feel some of that pain too. its an upseting but yet it is such a FANTASTIC poem. keep it up huni and take care
luv always
sonam

This is a very very sad and angry poem yet i think it's beautiful. i like the choice of words you use. good work

This is a very very sad and angry poem yet i think it's beautiful. i like the choice of words you use. good work

This is a very very sad and angry poem yet i think it's beautiful. i like the choice of words you use. good work

Good to see you back writing again. Impressive, as always.

This is a great poem you did a good job...its amazing how you write...keep it up..and please check out my poems thanks...

~allison