I look forward to each new poem from you. Brilliant. You use the language in such a mesmerizing way.

You have an amazing way of useing words to work with what you are trying to say. this is a wonderful poem!
crystal

I agree with bill and crystal....you really do hav an amazing way with words, keep up the great work! jesx

Very original, Great word choice. I have no suggestions on how to make it better. excellent.