Miss misinterpret

by Babyesha Naveed   Nov 21, 2005


Uhmmm..folks..im dealing n general...thanks.

I never know why do people has sometimes needed to be so rude,
even though i have always tried bein so good;
don\'t they realise my capabilities?
why i always got people\'s tease;
im not goin in perturbances,
they don\'t seem to be as my hindrances;
somtimes i got hurt.
sometimes i got joy.
when will they end?
when i only need one hand to lend;
i speak of nature,
and appreciate it,im sure;
but why it sometimes not minding me,
did no one havnt seen me?;
yet,as the day end and i gave glory to God, there iv heared the answers, i was misinterpreting nature.

im trying to make some more better..thanks ahead,if any of you do any comments for this.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Well, you need to learn that capitalizing the letter "I" saves you from the slang section..I suggest you do it. The format is not to my liking, the flow is a little off, but other than that, great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel

    I really Like this one keep it up!!!