by silent eyes Nov 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Look in to my eyes |
by Carrotgirl
Know should be now, otherwise I really like you writting style , Elise |
"See" and "Me" are powerful words, use them when neccassary, keep up the good work... your poems are so emotional which is what makes them so fantastic! *hugs* |
Thx for the comment, if u'd lyk sum constructive critisim, u used, see and me to much, try and be creative when thinking of verse endings. look in a dictionary or theasaurus to find similar words that sound similar, i have never done that but its a good idea. anywayz keep writing, poetry is ur interrpretation of something, an art to be used frivolously. |
Thx for the comment, if u'd lyk sum constructive critisim, u used, see and me to much, try and be creative when thinking of verse endings. look in a dictionary or theasaurus to find similar words that sound similar, i have never done that but its a good idea. anywayz keep writing, poetry is ur interrpretation of something, an art to be used frivolously. |