Thx for the comment, if u'd lyk sum constructive critisim, u used, see and me to much, try and be creative when thinking of verse endings. look in a dictionary or theasaurus to find similar words that sound similar, i have never done that but its a good idea. anywayz keep writing, poetry is ur interrpretation of something, an art to be used frivolously.

Thx for the comment, if u'd lyk sum constructive critisim, u used, see and me to much, try and be creative when thinking of verse endings. look in a dictionary or theasaurus to find similar words that sound similar, i have never done that but its a good idea. anywayz keep writing, poetry is ur interrpretation of something, an art to be used frivolously.

"See" and "Me" are powerful words, use them when neccassary, keep up the good work... your poems are so emotional which is what makes them so fantastic! *hugs*

Know should be now, otherwise I really like you writting style , Elise