That is really cute i like it its very tru ,, best friends are tru they are supposed to b there for you that girl wasnt a good friend and no offense he wasnt worth it if he cna do that to you i dont kno yopu but iam sure you can find so much better for a best friend and a boy friend

Once again...a beautiful poem! You said what I wanted to but just couldn't. Thank you! Keep it up! You are very talented!

My "best friend", yeah...sure...
I just want to scream
Because she's broken my dreams
We were meant to be together,
We were supposed to be forever.
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you are so wonderful and even though your "best friend" is one of your best friends..i just think (Between you and me) that even though she's one of my best friends too you should be careful around her... because somthing like that means they dont really care and thats not what anyone deserves..
mucho love girlie,
your one and only BERTHA

Commenting on this poem once again! i think this is one of my favorites ever..but even though they once meant so much to you i think you've got to move on because neither of them are worth your time or tears.

My last comment at the last sentence.. "you've got to move on because neither of them are worth your time or tears" actually made me think of all this stuff thats happened to me! so tp the both of us and everyone else who has a problem like that! lol.

There was this one boy in my year, he wasn't really special but he made me laugh, so i just kept randomly liking him. Things will never be more than now, i still look for him when i'm out and love hearing his voice but i've come to accept it. I did take me 'bout 2 years mind! But i'm there finally... ish. What i'm trying (very badly) to say is that one day, you'll wake up and your heart wont ache as much as it did the night before. Your poetry symbolises your feeling brilliantly. Your def going down as a fave. :)

Lv A, x