by LOVE.ME.HATE.ME Nov 21, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
When I was young, |
The flow seems a littleinterupted in parts, but the content and strengh of emotions makes up for this. |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good, the rhymes sounds a bit forced though. Keep it up |
It has some really good emotions... its so sad... i hope ur dads ok |