by `*~1-lUv~*` Nov 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I am confused about "us". |
by Lithium
To true hunni u keep pushin on nice poem! xox rc |
Hey girl..well...I notice that you often use slang words in your poems...although they are not in the slang poems...well...this is just my opinion...I think it's better if you write the whole word...when you write a poem...instead of 2...write to...oh well...whatever suits you...just saying what I think...cause it will look better that way...neway...this is good... |
by TinyDancer46
I can relate to this poem so much... great job, hun! Keep up the good work! |
by JAY Poet
I loved it keep up the good work!!! |