Wow, that was a very good poem. You are really good, keep up the exellent work!

Allison

Aww love this poem.. gives me hope on life.. thxx for all you comments it means so much to me. this poem is an inspiration to me and other people. i hope you know if you ever need someone to talk to im here. you poem flowed perfectly and it had lots of meaning great job ill keep on checking out your poems =)

emotionless19

Wow! truly amazing poem, with a great message! thnx 4 ur comment :), was just a bad day thas all!

love mark xxxx

Wonderful poem! you made me cry!
absoloutely wondeful!!!! loved it!
very well done, keep writing
take care
xx xx xx

Well I was first attracted to this poem because of its title. It has triggered a few creative thoughts of my own. It was an amazing poem with an even greater message. I have no complaints, nor criticism - for if it was mine I wouldn't change a thing. I loved the way it pulled me into it, and the way it ended. "God told me there was nothing I had gained
From destroying my life to end temporal pain." Excellent.

Wow! again that means a ton to me, i'll try and get her to read them, or i will read them to her

Thought provoking and insperational
i liked it alot

That was teh best poem i have ever read. EVER, and you have so much inspired me, and in some way scared me out of some pain, i mean i just keep thinking that cutting will help and that if i comitt suicide then it would all go away, but you scare me, you in some ways save me. i really would love it if there was a way to talk. b.c i ahve been sying to talk to someone who understand.. :(

I think this poem is amazing.. i think you have a real talent ..

thank you for the comment on my poem and i really think that this helped ..

really nice job =]

Wow.. this goes WAY beyond description.. i mean, u saw wat my comments looked like.. i gotta admit, wen it comes to constructive criticism, im not reli a professional, but i base wat i write on my heart.. and i can tell wen i got a gud one on my hands.. this thing here.. is a work of art.. i absolutely enjoyed reading it tho it was reli sad.. the rhyme and flow wer perfect.. im sensitive 2 words and emotions.. and this poem here touched my heart and had deep and profound effects on me as a reader, a poet, and most importantly, as a human.. i, lyk u, believe that suicide isnt the answer.. its just a permanent solution to a temporary problem,.. and then ther will be no chance to repent or go bak.. keep ur head held high.. u can go wherever u believe u can
keep up the talent
chin up!!!
take care
NannO
p.s. im glad u recommended that i read this poem.. u r now officially one of my faves ;)

If there ever was a heart felt poem... its incredible and i admire your work.. and i took your advice about my other poem "Emotionally weird" .. i changed a few lined and i think it will be longer soon .. thanks for the advice ..

~David

Iv tryed commiting suicide so many times.. servived them all makes me wanna try harder and harder