Bubbles

by aaron c s   Nov 22, 2005


Flowing freely above us all,
Then suddenly end in a fall.
So gentle while they last,
Like I'm looking in the past.

Bubbles remind me of my life.
I'm on top of the world,
With the world at my supply,
With the most beautiful girl.

Then I pop.
I make the mistake.
No longer at the top,
Realizing I lost you as I wake.

But what I hope,
Is that this bubble will form again,
And we can give it another go,
With us back on top as more than friends.

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  • 18 years ago

    by uNfOrGiVeNsiN335

    You wrote it at my house

  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Nice poem.I liked the bubble image
    keep up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by anna

    Hey thats a good poems its cute

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Goooooooood poem i lovvvvvvvvve it hehe. kjeep it up hunn xxLISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey aaron,
    nice job, this poem sounds happier....idk.....bubbles make me think of happy thoughts....
    i like how u made it sound like extremely fragile happiness tho.....like ur on top of the world but u know it will never last.
    awesome job, and hey, thank u for all your comments, they really mean a lot.
    xoxo~*rachel*

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