Hey aaron,
nice job, this poem sounds happier....idk.....bubbles make me think of happy thoughts....
i like how u made it sound like extremely fragile happiness tho.....like ur on top of the world but u know it will never last.
awesome job, and hey, thank u for all your comments, they really mean a lot.
xoxo~*rachel*

Goooooooood poem i lovvvvvvvvve it hehe. kjeep it up hunn xxLISSA

Hey thats a good poems its cute

Nice poem.I liked the bubble image
keep up :)

You wrote it at my house