Comments : A Fallen Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow awesome write! i can feel the poem so much like its alive.. i can totally relate to it awesome job.. all your poems are great.. ur goin to my favs=) much love hunn.

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    I didn't comlpetely understand this one. OF the poems of yours that I read, this is the only one that has me puzzled. Oh, tere was a computer made error in the line:

    "and It;ll be ok"

    Easily fixable. Understanding aside, this was an alright poem. Good job! ^_^

    ~Anthony