Angel of Hope~~

by OverlookedTruth   Nov 22, 2005


So here i am again
Pencil and paper at hand
Writing away this sorrow
Begging for a better tomarrow

Tried my hardest to blink away the tears
but they found an escape
trickling down my face
Falling from these eyes created by gods grace

I dont know when this will all stop
When the rain from my eyes will clear
When my life will fill with brightness
When my days will stop feeling so meaningless

Send me an angel of hope
So i can stop feeling this way
With these thoughts imprisoning me
Send me an angel of hope
An angel that will set me free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    Hey

    that was a great poem i hope you find tru happiness one day coz i think ppl like us deserve it just like everyone else does we just got 2 find it with in ourselves stay strong love ya!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey, I really like your poem and think it has alot of potential! You're last verse is really strong, especially with the repitition you put in there, it really brought it out. I think your weakest point though is this verse, your rhyme scheme sort of fell out, being as brightness and meaningless dont quite fit together.
    When my life will fill with brightness
    When my days will stop feeling so meaningless
    I don't know what word would rhyme with brightness, but maybe we can find some completely other words... Well, it's really good though, I enjoyed it and hope to see more of your work. Well done! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by meaghan

    This poem reallly spoke to me it's well written and beautiful. it's also so true... well for me anyways.

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