This poem reallly spoke to me it's well written and beautiful. it's also so true... well for me anyways.

Hey, I really like your poem and think it has alot of potential! You're last verse is really strong, especially with the repitition you put in there, it really brought it out. I think your weakest point though is this verse, your rhyme scheme sort of fell out, being as brightness and meaningless dont quite fit together.
When my life will fill with brightness
When my days will stop feeling so meaningless
I don't know what word would rhyme with brightness, but maybe we can find some completely other words... Well, it's really good though, I enjoyed it and hope to see more of your work. Well done! :)

Hey

that was a great poem i hope you find tru happiness one day coz i think ppl like us deserve it just like everyone else does we just got 2 find it with in ourselves stay strong love ya!!!!