Holding Onto Nothing

by Ben   Nov 22, 2005


In this relm of lost memories,
I hang onto the words you said,
Dreaming you\'re still in love with me,
Holding onto a single thread.

Looking up at the black night sky,
I wonder if you ever think of me,
If you remember my name,
Think of how we used to be.

When I look at pictures of you,
I forget how to breathe,
I remember what love is,
When I re-read all the letters you sent me.

Do you think of what our future could be,
The things we could have had,
tell me, do you remember me,
and the love we shared.

In this relm of lost memories
I hang onto the words you said,
Dreaming you still love me...

�©Ben.S 2005-11-22

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  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    The second, third and fourth stanzas are my favorite, and I like how the first and last stanza have the same start, but the third line in the last stanza changes to fit the end of the poem. Personally I think it should be another stanza longer, but that's just me. It just seems you start getting into it and then dropped it to quickly. It's a great poem though, and you're a great person Ben. You don't deserve to be hurt like this, and I hope you know that, and I do sincerely apologize. Please take care, keep writing. xxxx

    Much love,
    Sarah.x.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I think this was a really good poem at the star, and flowed very well, but then it just seemed to lose something towards the end.

    Brad

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