Comments : Primordial Soup

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Thanks to the turd that voted this poem a 1
    lol

  • 19 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    :) I really like this poem alot... great rhythm flow, and the lines made me laugh. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    To the person that voted 1, it was probably over his head, too much to take in! he!he!

    Again another amibious write...Your words are so eloquently articulated. Flow flawless.

    Kisses
    Hayley