by Mezmeryz Nov 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Happiness is what youve never had, girl |
by Fsams
Simply superb dear! With good rhymes n a flawless flow. wow 5/5 |
Your poem feels so touching and yet so good.. powerful too but to me it feels like it jsut missing something.. but im still figuring that out.. so when I think of It i will have to let ya kno.. well good job and keep up the work!! |
by Angie
Hey you! This is a wonderful poem! I really luved it. I had to read it twice to understand it though, and i've got to say it was very powerful. There was so much emotion in your poem and i luved the was you made it flow. The rhythm was also well done. Another thing i found really interesting was your style, it was really random and unique. I liked it. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5 |
by Emma
Awe so sad... |
I loved the style of this poem! ur rhymes were amazing, and always one que. ur poem seem to flow so easy! its amazing 5/5 |