Wow awesome poem.. i love ur structure its soo unique.. this piece is really good=) thanks for the comment.. i'll check out other works of urs.. much love.

This is a new way nd i really loved it..its very touching nd i lvoed ur work..keep it up

Cute...has really cute...I really can't describe it...it's like a song...then it's like a poem...it just flow very well...and how cute is that...lol...

Oo! i love it! tee hee...
by the way thank you for commenting on my poem :)

Reallly reallly good i love it

Great poem. well writtn and expressive

Aw, what an amazing poem, you are such a great writer,keep up the amazing work!!
Megan

Hey great poem i really liked it very lovely im a bit like that girl to 5/5

Wow, this could have almost been a song! It had great flow and your message was a bit different than I have seen. i really did enjoy reading! A wonderful job! Sorry about the down voters, that sucks I have gotten them too!

-Tainted Mikochan

I liked how the poem was so unique and different. It wasnt so different though that it made ya stop... quite the opposite it caught my attention and kept me reading on. Good job!

I loved the style of this poem! ur rhymes were amazing, and always one que. ur poem seem to flow so easy! its amazing 5/5

Awe so sad...

Hey you! This is a wonderful poem! I really luved it. I had to read it twice to understand it though, and i've got to say it was very powerful. There was so much emotion in your poem and i luved the was you made it flow. The rhythm was also well done. Another thing i found really interesting was your style, it was really random and unique. I liked it. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Your poem feels so touching and yet so good.. powerful too but to me it feels like it jsut missing something.. but im still figuring that out.. so when I think of It i will have to let ya kno.. well good job and keep up the work!!

Simply superb dear! With good rhymes n a flawless flow. wow 5/5