This poem is really good, it hit me hard on feb 11,2005 this year my father died and the way u wrote this and the things u said were kinda basically they same as it was for me. i think u did a really good job and i hope we could talk more.
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-Jodie

Very touching I went through the same thing but it was with my grandfather he died a day before my birthday