Please Stay

by Michelle   Nov 22, 2005



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Please Stay

Are you mad at me?
I am afraid inside,
I'm not sure why,
I'm afraid one day,
I will have to tell you good-bye.

Are you mad at me?
Hopefully, you aren't.
Hopefully, you will see.

Hopefully, you will understand,
And, will help me on my journey.
Are you mad at me?

Hopefully you aren't mad,
Hopefully, you can guide and lead,
Me, In order to help me succeed.

Are you mad at me?
Please say no,
I hope you will be able to see.

Just one day,
I need your help,
Please stay.

For atleast one day,
I need your help,
Please stay.

Please stay.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dreams

    You know this read like some sad rock lyrics to me. lol. I guess it's because I'm listening to some rock music while reading it. But well, I like this a lot. I like it for its simplicity. But I thought maybe a few more lines to why he/she will get mad. Maybe it's just me though. Nonetheless, a great piece.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hi! it's more like a song! Well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by oldthings

    I love your poems, they all have so much emotion in them. i like the repetitions of words you use in this it really gets the feelings across and lets me feel them stronger. 5/5 again from me.

  • 19 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I really loved this poem, you did a great job with it...i can't wait to read more
    luv em

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Very nice...sounds like a song...very good...lol...hev nothing much to say about it...just great...

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