Wow im blown away! such a great poem!! i really liked it
great job
luv courtie

Loved the flow, thx so much for r/c on my poem!

love always

natalie

Very nice...sounds like a song...very good...lol...hev nothing much to say about it...just great...

I really loved this poem, you did a great job with it...i can't wait to read more
luv em

I love your poems, they all have so much emotion in them. i like the repetitions of words you use in this it really gets the feelings across and lets me feel them stronger. 5/5 again from me.

Hi! it's more like a song! Well done!

You know this read like some sad rock lyrics to me. lol. I guess it's because I'm listening to some rock music while reading it. But well, I like this a lot. I like it for its simplicity. But I thought maybe a few more lines to why he/she will get mad. Maybe it's just me though. Nonetheless, a great piece.