WOW .. very very good I love it .. Full of true outstanding emotions ! I hope to read more of ure poetry it rocks keep up the writing !!
xxXxx Luv ya xxXxx
Crystal

This is really good. I really enjoyed reading this. Lucky was a name is a figure of speech i'm thinking. If you think about it everyone is lucky in there own world but everyone wants to commit suicide or die sooner or later. Even though if you have millions of friends and always smiling doesn't mean your depressed inside. I do really like this one. amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. i hope i made sence out of all that lol. love always and forever.

Wow hun that poem is really deep and full of emotion.. Great job 5/5

This was fantastic, it flowed from stanza to stanza effortlessly. The repetition of the name Lucky really beat out a pace for the poem. Very orginal and ajoy to read. Fantastic writing...I'm off to read some more...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

The repetition cinched the poem for me, although the last stanza didn't flow as smooth as the others. Overall, still a good write. Cheers.