by TinyDancer46
Simply amazing.... this is a great poem, and the emotions you expressed were so deep... Keep up the great work!! |
by .tiana ღ laura.
I love your poem! its so beautiful and breath-taking.... i'll keep reading your work!!! |
by cLumsy
Wow.... thats the only word i can think of... wow... ;D 5/5 |
by Princess09
Good poem, Good rhyme and flow. Add pu nctuation but that's all. |
by Karla Gordon
I enjoyed your poem. |
by libby
You really captured a feeling here, it made me feel lonely just reading it. I love your irregular rhyme scheme, you pull it off without sounding awkward. My favorite part was this: "and I keep falling into every person I meet". I don't know why it appeals to me, but I like it a lot. Great job. |
Wow |
by Tim Fleckney
You write so beutiffully is it any wonder you were the first to hit my list of favorites. Thank you for a great read. |
by gracey grey
WOW! And all this while I thought I lived in two worlds! I really liked this poem.......some words are my sentiments exactly.......sigh... |