by Truest Lies Nov 22, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I like the way the wind floats through the window, |
Wow. . . this poem really makes you think. . . however you may want to quit life, you must remember its precious. . . this had lots of meaning to me personally but it sends out a great message to all. . . . its well written with a perfect flow. . . i agree with amber that that the ending is good enough to become a classic. . . |
by Melissa
Beautifully written poem, great job! |