I really liked this poem.
It was great.
Keep on writing.

Alixia

Thnx you guys

That was utterly breath-taking. I read so much meaning behind it. It hit home so hard...I'm trying my best to hold back the tears. Keep it up!

I love it sooo much very good job!! ♥

Wow
me likey me likey me likey
it rocks >=P
And it even rhymes! Go you, i cant write long poems that rhyme lol

and thanks for the comments on mine
and as for the cheese title....nope, i dont know either

I know exactly how you feel.. ive got a poem that has the same feeling. Read if you like...theres actually a couple of them like that. anyway, Really good poem..i loved it...keep writing..i like all your poems..your such a good writer