Clonjey ...
You have so many great points in this write ..
It is so true we can't even take our own live but take away anothers .
I wrote a true poem about my 13 year old cousin "13 to young to die" and I would rather see this man spend the rest of his life in jail each day remembering the life he took away and maybe he would find God and ask for forgiveness...
This is a poem many should read and see the wisdom behind your words ..
You have many incredible points ..

Great poem, you make some excellent points here, i agree with a lot that you said. good work:)xxxx

It could happen, we could have a trusting world only if ppl can drop there egos, which is very unlikely, but if we teach our kids when time comes maybe, just maybe we just might be able to have a good world. Keep it up you are good! and check out mine if you have a chance.

Hey awsome poem.. u have some talent.. great to see i agree with 'never quite me' us has some good points that you expressed well. I truly hope you continue with the great work! Thanks for letting me read this ! 5/5 xoxo