Aww that was sad it was also really well written great job!!!!
xaaronx

This is great idea overall, but I have some suggestions.
In the 5th stanza when you say "real, not fake" its a little redundant, so maybe take out the real and just say something like "someone who won't be fake" to keep the rhyme too.
in the 6th stanza "to live for the very last time" doesn't sound right, like you are implying that you live more than once maybe put breathing or something instead.
Good job keeping a steady rhyme scheme troughout.

If you need someone to listen to you, I will always be here for you.

Very good poem. Well expressed. I cannot thank you enough for sharing. You're on my favs list.

Big Hugs, always,

Michelle

If you ever need someone to talk to on that, I can sympatize. I hardly see my friends now we are in diff classes and its hols lol. keep going some day youll find that someone is there for you

That was really good..n to answer ur ? about my acrostic poem is b/c i did it for a class and the teacher isn't making us have the word that the poem spells to mean the same thing as the poem....but i was gonna write another one n-e-wayz n compare the 2 n decide which one i want to turn in...but thx for ur comment tho

OMG!!! literally... i have tears running down my cheeks... gah!! That i can sooo relate too... 5/5!!!!

comment my work too plz...
kaykay

Very good poem with a well written message that comes right out and grips your feelings... wow I sounded so dramatic, eh? But yes Check out my poems also thank you!

Your poem is amazing! i saw ur topic asking ppl to comment so i did lol! will u pls comment on mine? u have got sure talent!xxxxxxxx

Awesome job. . .*

WOWOWOW!! thsi is amazing!!
i loved the part of

If life was measured by tears
Then I would be so old
Because I've cried so many tears
My heart is starting to turn cold

u r very talented, keep writting!

Once again this was a well written poem. emotion shown through well.. great work