Our Path

by silhouette fairy   Nov 22, 2005


The loving light
of the moon
streams into my window
tears shine on my cheeks
after I was told to leave him alone
now wondering why
not wanting to listen
but here you are
here I am
our paths aren't clear
what should we do
once we step
we can't go back
all of the turns
are certainly final
we have separate paths
but maybe soon
our paths will merge
only time will tell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow....this poem uses gr8 wording...and has a lotta emotion...gr8 work! and its easy 2 relate 2...5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This is so beautiful . I really enjoyed reading this poem . You worded it well and kept it flowing smoothly . You are a excellent writter . I look forward to reading more of your work .

    Your new fan
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow really liked this poem! it was amazingly written and i am most definetly going to read more of your work! keep it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey that was really great! You have talent. keep it up and write more. Your poems arent lame at all! lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved this so much it reminds me of so many things. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. Keep writing you have talent. real talent xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

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