Surpression of depression

by samantha   Nov 22, 2005


All alone in her room
Only thinking of doom
Crying till her eyes turn red
While lying in her bed
Thoughts running through her head
Wishing she was dead
She didnt want to live
She couldnt take it anymore
Wanting a way out
But nothing came to her mind
Only screams and shouts

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Ok, overall a fair poem, it had emotion, but wasn't powerful, it didn't grasp my attention, also, the rhyming was very simple and inconsistant as well. the language was not very adult either, when i read the title it used larger words so i was thinking that it would be a detailed poem with good language, but instead i was disapointed with the somewhat childish words.

    Keep it up.

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